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MFM2 – Ceremony (Congratulations, Sweltering Celt!)

August 3rd, 2009

MicroFantasyMondayIconSheer white robes fell gently to the ground as she writhed before the fire.  Burgundy curls danced over milky white shoulders as she threw her head back and forth.  Delicate fingers traced supple curves as she swayed this way and that.

And then she froze.  The tribal music stopped.  And a dark shape formed on the other side of the blaze.

Her body tensed as she crouched close to the ground and watched him draw ever closer.  Amber light licked at taught muscles as the girl shifted her weight back and forth, trying to anticipate which direction he would go.

He came into the light and she saw him.  Terror warped her features as he drew ever closer.  And she took off to the right, spraying the onlookers with sand.

A man’s voice boomed a strange, exotic tongue from behind the handmade mask.

The girl froze again.

She turned to look at the figure, bewildered.  Curious, she took a step in his direction.

He was on her immediately and shoved her to the ground.  She pushed up to hands and knees and he put a foot on her back and flattened her again.  Another man handed him beautiful sashes and he quickly bound her to nearby stakes.  And there, he took her, his bride, before his family.

His mouth found her breasts as he entered her.  Her moan was all the consent he needed.  He began thrusting in and out in time with the movements of her hips and she to cry out and fight.  No one moved to help her.  She had been claimed.

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  1. August 3rd, 2009 at 23:33 | #1

    Ceremony really resonated in a primitive way, didn’t it. And the way you escalated her fear was cool as well. Nice imagery.

  2. August 4th, 2009 at 08:14 | #2

    @PapaTomLA Yeah it did. And thanks 🙂 I’ve been trying to comment on yours for five or ten minutes but for some reason blogger hates my openid. Lame :/

  3. August 4th, 2009 at 12:14 | #3

    Hawwwwt! srsly

  4. August 4th, 2009 at 16:52 | #4

    @Amber Thanks! I thought so too! My panties got all wet writing it. Lol.
    .-= rayne´s last blog ..Just… thinking. =-.

  5. August 4th, 2009 at 17:44 | #5

    Primitive indeed. Nicely done, rayne.

  6. August 4th, 2009 at 21:50 | #6

    Oh hell … *melt* YUM x

  7. August 5th, 2009 at 19:17 | #7

    primitive, sexy, well done 😀

  8. August 6th, 2009 at 12:14 | #8

    @Eliot @vanimp @kyle Thanks, guys 🙂
    .-= rayne´s last blog ..You lead. I’ll follow. =-.

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